Magazine Advert Second Draft and Feedback

I have designed a second draft of my magazine advert now and unfortunately I am not happy with the result. I feel that the advert looks too crowded and I think that the colour scheme needs changing. However, I do like the theme of mental health and although the advert is not at the standard that I want it to be yet, I still think that I can create a strong, meaningful advert whilst staying with this theme. My audience suggested the idea of focusing the advert around the artist alone which would allow me to get rid of 'The Joker' character and make the advert look less crowded and more visually appealing so this is the change I am likely to make.