I received feedback on my first draft and the audience said they really liked the theme of mental health. They said all images have a clear meaning behind them and that the theme links well to the music video. A suggestion that they made was that I should include the artist in some images which is something I will take into consideration when making my final product. I also realise that some of these images may be hard to create on adobe fireworks and so I may have to change some but keep the same messages behind them.
